Monday, November 9, 2009

The First Draft of a one sentence STORY

Once in a lifetime, in a jublient and wonderful land filled with people, walking quckly as everyone can is their favorite sport.
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6 comments:

  1. MichelleNovember 11, 2009 at 9:39 PM

    but one day, a boy named Brain broke the wall that every body was on.

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  2. DongHwiNovember 11, 2009 at 10:01 PM

    After that incident, people said he was a terrorist.

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  3. AnonymousNovember 12, 2009 at 9:49 PM

    Then real terrorist came right after that police came too.

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  4. CoolNovember 12, 2009 at 9:52 PM

    "Oh my godness!!!!!!"

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  5. Tina____November 13, 2009 at 8:03 PM

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  6. Tina____November 15, 2009 at 9:44 PM

    The police said 'Bye Bye" and go back to his house sadly

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